*In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe
that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require the financial security that marriage can bring. To what extent do you agree.
Females in many nations do not see the need to be married while some individuals think that marriage can only bring financial security for women as they are able to earn salaries for themselves. In my opinion, i believe that financial security is not the only thing marriage can provide for women. It can also provide procreation and also prevent loneliness in old age and so on.This will be explained in details in my essay discussion.
Firstly, there are so many benefits a female can gain from been married apart from the believe that it provides only financial security. Marriage gives women the opportunity to procreate .As God as destined it that females can have children, so given birth to children by women gives them the joy of experiencing motherhood and how it feels to be mother. For instance, a pregnant woman will be happy as she knows that somebody is living in her womb and will be delivered one day.
Secondly,Marriage prevent loneliness amongst women. This is due to the fact that they are married and they have spouse to talk to and share their feelings with.for example, a married woman will always be looking forward to go home to see her husband and children after hustling and bustling of the dayas she knows that have people at home waiting to welcome her back .
In conclusion, marriage do not only bring financial security as it also provides the priviledge of experiencing the joy of giving birth to children and it also prevent loneliness in women
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, look, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1229.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80078125 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67428144617 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5078125 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5020221089 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.555555556 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4444444444 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.7777777778 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225274399861 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10938147248 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847525117439 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148366502364 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610316573178 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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