In many countries women no longer feel the need to get married,some people believe that this because women are able to earn own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring to. What do you agree or disagree
Firstly: education is the biggest reason , so women think no need of marriage in life,because women earn the good pay , “fulfil of theirdaily need”. They do not depend the male.for instance, some year ago female are not educated.they do work only at home ,and also they bring some money on his spouse, they are totally depended on life partner.but nowadays advancement of technology female gain higher education about the study,and flora or founa “as well as nature”. moving further:, women loss there freedom because they believe that after marriage.when they go outside firstly give the permission own his in law family , also tell the all “situation or why”. so in 21 centuries women think that marriages no necessary in life.
Second: after the marriage the many extra responsibilities occurs on head . Some related to home,some relationships or some depend on emotion.female think that marriage life so difficult or complicated life.”ahed”: today living relationship is also popular in my society ,both gender feel the all emotions, before marriage they share all the personal or phlysical thing .so women do not believe in marriage.
Overall: the road women are self sufficient “it is good” but marriage is lovely relationships not a daister.during the marriage people feel the own family traditions or more marray cermany.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, so, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34502835229 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646226415094 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.905492256 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.571428571 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195232175426 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107918709515 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044619682467 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139511939947 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0165185803317 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.11 50.2224549098 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.