In many countries, young people are finding it harder and harder to find permanent jobs. Why is this? What can be done to improve the situation?
Nowadays, thanks to the innovation of science and technology, tasks that humans used to do were replaced by computers and robots. While this event reduced the labor costs that business owners have to pay, consequently, it also causes laborers to lose their job and reduces the number of jobs. Hence, it is more and more difficult for the youth to find jobs because everything is becoming more sophisticated, challenging, and demands humans to abandon the dated manual laboring jobs and move to knowledge working jobs.
Firstly, advancements in science and technology replaced physical labor jobs. Less and less human is involving in those jobs because of that. For instance, in order to make an artificial lake in the past, a project manager had demanded hundreds of laborers. Today, they only need some excavators and humans to control those machines. Secondly, the world of humans and society is becoming more complicated and diversified. As a result, more proficient people will have highly-paid jobs and the remainder will be on unemployment.
There are countless methods to save people from unemployment, I will talk about the prominent ones only. Lacking education is one of the main reasons why some people hard to find a job. They usually come from poor families and can’t afford to pay tuition. Therefore, many education institutions implemented scholarships, which is a high-rewarding method, and formed many opportunities for many excellent people.
In conclusion, the main cause of the rise in unemployment is the replacement of machines and robots, which do labor work, and the increase in complexity and variety in humans and society. There are various methods to solve this problem, but humans still need to put more effort in order to catch up with the high-developing society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...hysical labor jobs. Less and less human is involving in those jobs because of that. For inst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22413793103 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94390884481 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593103448276 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9258339306 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131594862623 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041395160091 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051572342794 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.077072822874 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522446423815 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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