In many countries, young people are granted certain privileges and responsibilities at the age of sixteen. Clearly parents have a responsibility to both care for and prepare their children as they approach this important milestone.
Currently, in many parts of the world, individuals more likely pay attention their children's future life, even, still their childhood too. When children becoming adolescent, parents supply requirements and settled obligations while some people concern life of children that they perceive on their infants could commit various crimes, especially when their adolescence. As a result parents want to exercise too much control their teenagers. However, in my view, parents might not take into account changings of upbringings which is their children. It can lead to children have to be lazy even embarrassed ability appear them.
Firstly, in our modern life young people's post are more likely to adopt a resolution whilst they are encouraged in family environment and government while, there are several necessity under children's responsibility. However, parents might worry extreamly. Nonetheless, they always have not to behave in the best interests of their children. For instance, in some countries such as, Scotland, the age of criminal responsibility is as low as ten. Nevertheless, parents ignore main problem is that when setting standards of behaviour, the child's level of maturity needs to be take into account. It has contributed, parents intervene more and more children's life and this is not linked kindness.
Secondly, in fact, it is often better to negotiate responsibilities with adolescents than to impose responsibilities on them.
Therefore, parents need to be held accountable for their children's action in order for their children to distinguish right from wrong.
To sum up, children are able to learn cooperating with others when they are independently. This can develop the ability of initiative.
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cooperate'.
Suggestion: to cooperate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in fact, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40151515152 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94773885732 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594696969697 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 264.0 20.2975951904 1301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1426.0 106.682146367 1337% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 264.0 20.7667163134 1271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 174.0 7.06120827912 2464% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297738041503 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.297738041503 0.084324248473 353% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156207292568 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575634476344 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 136.0 13.0946893788 1039% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -204.94 50.2224549098 -408% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.4 11.3001002004 950% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.52 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.68 8.58950901804 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 107.6 10.1190380762 1063% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 108.0 10.7795591182 1002% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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