Many criminals re-offend after they have been punished. Why do some people continue to commit crimes after they have been punished, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
It is undeniable that reformed offenders can turn into normal, productive people and return to their society. However, they keep in any chance to their old course of committing crimes after having been received punishment, I believe that there are still some possible solutions to address it.
Recommitting crimes after their punishment may happen as ex-prisoners may face discrimination and may be under childhood pressure. Reformed criminals may be prejudiced with resentment and apprehension that they will repeat it once their criminal's history is revealed. In this way, most of them will not receive any job’s acceptance for earning a living, and may also bear with the stiff reprimand. Moreover, any problem from their tender age that would directly affect their personality and lead them to the criminals may be reminisced and influence them again. They may mistake and ingrain erroneous thoughts from their parent's sense of sickening love.
There are some possible solutions to handle this problem. First of all, the government should facilitate for the reformed criminals to get employment or to continue to develop their work through vocational education in the prison. At the same time, inhabitants should be raised awareness about giving chances for ex-prisoners to associate back with the community. Furthermore, the government should also organize psychology courses to guide them in the right way and citizens also show their love to convert criminals.
In conclusion, everyone should take part in preventing any bias towards the rehabilitated offenders as they want to be good citizens and burden from their childhood to build a better society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, as to, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41538461538 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83354796727 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603846153846 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1266600826 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202468516281 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753874608293 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612849260341 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123595526626 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0711046452907 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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