Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourism industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?
Tourism is already a huge industry and this is expanding even more rapidly in developing countries. Many developing countries have taken extensive initiatives to expand their tourism and thus many of them have gained a considerable amount of popularity in this industry. I believe that the reasons for developing countries to embark this industry are many folds and this is quite a positive development for them.
First and foremost popularity around the world is the reason many developing countries are expanding their tourism. They know quite well that popularity and exposure to the world are the main keys to expanding their presence in the world. For instance, Malaysia is a well-known Asian country and the expansion of their tourism sector has established this popularity. Second, tourism industry brings a huge amount of foreign money that can be used for the development of the country. For instance, developing countries like Thailand, China and Spain are earning a huge amount of foreign money from their tourism industries. Third, tourism actually increases the business opportunities of a country and thus many countries are having a better trade relationship with developed countries only because the tourists of western world came to visit such countries first. Finally, tourism creates job opportunities for local people and gives the host country an excellent opportunity to develop their infrastructure.
I firmly believe that despite some negative effects tourism industry offers a huge benefit to a country. Among the negative effects environmental pollutions, influences of foreign culture and threat of terrorism are often mentioned. However, in this era of globalisation countries cannot shut their doors for foreigners. This is the age of technology and we can fly to any place within few hours. So the tourism industry is rapidly enhancing and a country should take advantages of it. Earning foreign remittance, creating more jobs for local people, introducing unique tradition to the world, improving the transportation system, knowing cultural diversity are some of the quite astonishing advantages that development of tourism can offer.
In short, the main reason developing countries are expanding their tourism industries is because they understand the huge potential and benefits this industry offers and without any doubt, this is quite a positive development.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'effects'' or 'effect's'?
Suggestion: effects'; effect's
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, first, however, second, so, third, thus, well, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52989130435 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94145653186 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48097826087 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1106754068 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.705882353 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6470588235 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.507874369387 0.244688304435 208% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.19112574147 0.084324248473 227% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119795991925 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.374241309141 0.151304729494 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124180526529 0.056905535591 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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