The tourism business is the backbone of some underdeveloped and poor countries, which have splendid tourism attractions but not a wide range of income sources. Economies of many such countries solely depend on this industry; hence they promote tourism in their territories.
The tourism industry is one of the biggest income sources in many countries. Promoting the tourist places in their country boosts the number of visitors which generates the sources of income for the locals. Also as many such visitors are foreigners; they bring their currency along with them which helps the overall economy of the country they visit.
Though tourism may have positive effects on the economy, it also has some detrimental impacts. For instance, a report shows that the Everest mountain is now popular than ever and everyone wants to climb it once in their lifetime. However, as many of them don’t have any experience they end up being dead. Apart from that, reports also indicate that garbage such as plastic bags, bottles, and sleeping bags; left behind by such climbers is mounting up like never before and becoming a cause of global warming.
In essence, people have a tendency to destroy a beautiful place before moving to the next one. Even Though tourism helps people from local communities economically and generates various jobs tourism departments must ensure that it’s not affecting the environment of the place in a harmful way and visitors are following the rules effectively. So that these tourist places remain the same for the next generation to come.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...s the sources of income for the locals. Also as many such visitors are foreigners; t...
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Line 7, column 282, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a harmful way" with adverb for "harmful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... affecting the environment of the place in a harmful way and visitors are following the rules ef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, apart from, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1322.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18431372549 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59274710731 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9959266567 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.166666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116526139367 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480011267424 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494530825026 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746402087834 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462355946177 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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