many developing countries have welcomed foreign companies, while others think that local businesses should be protected and supported instead.
discuss both sides and give your opinion
Having cooperation in industrial field with international relation has been usual for the middle economy countries, yet some people argued the country however should encourage more to inhabitants business. I will cover and discuss both issues which below.
To begin with, industrial ministry in developing countries may has concerned to increase domestic and national income in appropriate ways as joining venture with international companies. Considering prosperity of population live may be primary and priority for the government behind disposing business activity. As the problem solution, establishing company under foreigner supervision may enhance the number of taxes income and profiting national through the investors. As many as important endowing such financial side, international experts often provide various trainings to gain employee skills and productivities For instances, the institution itself simoultaneously organizing human resource development programmes per year such as talent maping, talent acquisition and job performance.
Albeit join business with foreigner companies resulting more benefits globally, mostly residents which occupy nearby still show sensible disagreed. Nation first and locally success become the main issues to be claimed by the dwellers and demand the government to prioritize national growth market. Taking side to the local society, accepting more foreigner cooperation will reduce the opportunity of local inhabitants to gain higher career and they might be the lack of skill development. Unexperience to develop business skill, discover creative ideas for the core business, and repeatedly occupaying in lower level employee can be uccurance for the local people in this sort situation.
In short, the government may prepared paradoxical reasons to workship with outsider companies and this decision has been long benefits for future country, meanwhile developing national population business ability also becomes crucial point to be concerned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will cover and discuss both issues which below. To begin with, industrial minist...
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Line 3, column 342, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'foreigner' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: foreigner
...ng side to the local society, accepting more foreigner cooperation will reduce the opportunity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, may, so, still, well, while, as for, for instance, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05281690141 5.12529762239 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98046897292 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654929577465 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.1448415894 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.272727273 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8181818182 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201283728633 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727333727946 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021203560218 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114535245085 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309398318699 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.11 12.4159519038 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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