Many developing countries place a lot of importance on tourism. Why is this? Do you think that this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, modern lifestyles that emphasize more on relaxing and rising income have brought developing countries numerous opportunities to make advancements in tourism industries as a lucrative source of money. Even though There are plenty of reasons and supporters for this trend and its significant effect on developing nations, I strongly believe that this is a negative development.
Personally, I assume that there are at least two main important reasons why traveling tendency is being kept an eye on by many states. The first reason is marvelous economic benefits and abundant income revenue. A well-developed tourism industry can create a lot of newly arrived businesses and careers which are grand opportunities for the local community. Since more jobs are created, it not only reduces the unemployment rate, a serious problem in many countries, but there are also more and more contributions to the government’s budget, which can substantially improve the living standards of people and strengthen the country’s economy. The second reason is that boosting international tourism can not only encourage universal relations but also to share a country’s exotic customs and culture with people all around the world. This also facilitates the experience for many individuals who are interested in mastering multi-cultures and foreign ways of living. Furthermore, intercultural understanding guarantees peace and mutual respect between countries and cultures all over the world.
However, this tendency also causes negative consequences in terms of the environment and social problem. So far, tourism has created mountains of plastic every year as the majority of street restaurants constantly use this material to pack take-away food and drink. What's more, many developing nations lack proper methods to deal with the waste or to raise tourists’ awareness, therefore, it commonly ends up littering throughout rivers, beaches and roads which would badly affect ecosystems. Furthermore, there is an extensive problem that visitors may also damage various historical monuments as well as landmarks because of their poor consciousness. All these irresponsible behaviors can damage the destination as well as local citizens.
To sum up, it is crystal clear that the financial advantages which tourism offers is undoubtedly the main reason why there is an existence of the trend of expanding this industry. Nevertheless, without a country’s proper management, this development will be troublesome in the long run.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, well, at least, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67631578947 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15839798622 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615789473684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5735475771 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.8125 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288625770371 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841978130243 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624553008063 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187251178563 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452460891486 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asize more on relaxing and rising income have brought developing countries numero...
^^
Line 4, column 267, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: What's
...erial to pack take-away food and drink. Whats more, many developing nations lack prop...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll be troublesome in the long run.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, well, at least, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2157.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.67631578947 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15839798622 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615789473684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5735475771 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.8125 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288625770371 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841978130243 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624553008063 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187251178563 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452460891486 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.