Many educators believe that international exchange trips are beneficial for students. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, a variety of students are taking international exchange trips into consideration, as they are convinced of the beneficial reasons behind this, which are advised by experts. Personally, I agree with this but I have never underestimated potential drawbacks when students themselves actually integrate into those brand-new experiences in reality.
On the one hand, international exchange programs are of immense benefit that are obvious to students. Ever since they set foot on one foreign country, everything then will become opportunities which contribute to accommodate students with a rich linguistic environment. That would be wise seizing this ideal chance to mingle with indigenous people, to get to know about their unique cultural traditions. The edge, after these trips, exchange students will have over other candidates when entering workforce is the aspect of being globally minded. This open mindset descends from having access to various cultures across different continents as well as embracing cultural diversity; alongside, these global citizens also get actively involved in world-wide most daunting challenges, for instance, in which our Earth are desperately calling for help.
Despite the aforementioned benefits, encountering some obstacles to assimilating a new living environment is really challenging. Students may go through the preliminary stages of frustration, confusion and anxiety due to cultural discrepancies; in the worse case, for example, they constantly find themselves longing for their hometowns then they can be tormented by the feeling of being socially marginalized. In addition, victims of gender discrimination, particularly racial prejudice can be badly damaged in terms of mentality.
In conclusion, benefits are paired well with drawbacks when it comes to international exchange trips; therefore, discretion are advised.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, may, really, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93726937269 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21131172228 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686346863469 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.763210853 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.272727273 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134033750249 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511188480629 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393873087905 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082736823702 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383035915601 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.47 12.4159519038 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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