Many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of this trend ?
Many families devolve their elders to care homes to be nurtured. Although this issue brings positive side such as regular programmed - treatments, its negative side such as being mentally isolated can be considered.
The proponents of this occurrence might assume that care homes provide great nursing programs which are scheduled well. This is because care homes or nursing homes is systematically organised. By dint of this, the families' fellows freely enjoy their business without feeling anxiety or worry. As an illustration, Mom Home cares which lies in West Jakarta, arrange all the elders' activities in 24-hour schedule. The nurses start to wake the patients up at 5.00 am then doing physical exercise in every morning, they set the meal times up to 3 times a day, they prepare warm water for taking bath in the evening, the employees are also scheduled to invite the elders to enjoy walking around. Shortly, they keep the ageing people there with a good schedule.
Looking from a different perspective, letting the elders live at home cares incurs such a lonely feeling to the elders involved. this is because they will be separated from their beloved families. They will miss their children, they will be unable to make a joke with their grand sons and their grand daughters everyday. This, then, finally b ajarings about alienation, and at worst, the elders will feel being expelled and depressed.
In conclusion, I believe that this kind of phenomenon has disadvantage such as being alienated, while its positive side such as regular schedule of treatments can be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13409961686 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62424547124 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60153256705 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5609060631 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26477522281 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113384091672 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815813147959 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146570354311 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642023196079 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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