Many factors motivate people in the workplace Of these money is the most important To what extent do you agree or disagree

A plethora of components are able to foster employees in the organization, but financial motivation is considered to be a paramount reason. From my perspective, I firmly disagree with this statement, as there are more pivotal factors. The job satisfaction as well as the bond between employees and establishment are two other crucial elements.
First and foremost, the satisfaction and the fondness for the job are regarded to be the pre-eminent determinents, due to the fact that people find it more intriguing and easier to do their favourite activity. Besides, this provide you with the enthusiasm which is able to assist to overcome the pressure, obstacles and to pursue their goals. To illustrate, a literature teacher in Vietnam named Thanh Hoai Thanh who has been dedicating herself to imparting knowledge to the students always takes full responsibility for teaching no matter how drained she is. With numerous times she got serious ill or even had to get IV fluid, she still endeavoured to teach her online students. This happened because she loves teaching children and she regards it as her duty. As a result, satisfaction plays a vital role in making more attempt into performance.
Furthermore, the personal belonging to the company or in an organization is also viewed as a basic point. In the workplace, employees certainly have a desire to be an essential part of that establishment. They want to be recognized, appreciated and belonged to that organization. To clarify, having a compliment of an accomplishment might tremendously boost an employee's self-assurance and contentment as well as the feeling of connection with that workplace. Therefore, people forget about money when they found sense of belonging, when they become a part of the occupational place.
To summarize, money motivates a part of society to work. However, the other components such as gratification and the sense of familiarity also have the fundamental influence.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, well, such as, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25559105431 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25316498254 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600638977636 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4494094449 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8125 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0695421425509 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0223086233209 0.084324248473 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339088203934 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0439065202724 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0150563776002 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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