Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol.
What is your opinion?
Laws which have been present for the ban of sale and use of hard drugs must be applied to all drugs. Yet, many authorities have put laws in place, which do not allow selling and usage of hard drugs such as, heroin and cocaine, but allow consumers to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. This essay agrees completely due to two reasons: health and value for money.
Alcohol and tobacco when purchased from store and consumed are known well to cause variety of diseases, most notably cancer. For example , people who have consumed tobacco and alcohol have been found to be prone to mouth and stomach cancer , which is a very dangerous condition and if left untreated , can prove to be fatal and many die from other complications also. Hence, a person health is adversely affected in a negative way due to purchase of drugs.
Moreover, as these drugs are known to cause issues , purchasing them will be a wastage of people's hard earned money. Moreover, This can also cause altercation in families as hard earned money is being used to buy a product which only affects the health . For example , a family person, when buys tobacco is wasting his hard earned money which will only cause a fight with his family , as instead of using money to buy what is required to sustain , tobacco doesn't help in that in any way. This can be a serious problem if overlooked as families can be affected adversely.
To conclude , I completely agree that there should be a law, which upholds a ban on all hard drugs, including tobacco and alcohol as they create health problems and affect people's families as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67615658363 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35655283421 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540925266904 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.8227556796 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.454545455 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399192827542 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155287848186 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150031144394 0.0667982634062 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261728584556 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.161618092661 0.056905535591 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.