Many authorities are focusing on economic developments as their primary aim, but many think that governments should try to make progress in other sectors as well. In my opinion, it is economy that drives a country to develop in all aspects.
On the one hand, economy plays a crucial role in every country, being described as the most powerful weapon in 21st century. In other words, in the past, the country which had a strong military power with disasterous weapons was able to rule the whole world; however, nowadays it becomes the country that has a high economic power. If a country is economically developed, it will have big influence on countries with low economic values and it perhaps has the right to decide the world affairs such as the USA. Moreover, owning to its economic stability and industarialization, intelligent people from other developing countries will go there to work for it. A country having a great deal of diverse human resources will progress even more and more, so a strong economic can create a ultimately beneficial loop.
On the other hand, other sectors have their own roles to help a country develop harmonizelly and to make a nation lively. Firstly, a country should have a reliable military to protect its people, otherwise, it will not be respected by neighbouring countries. Secondly, goverments should invest in imposing laws that are trustworthy and practical enough to make citizens follow the regulatons to have a peaceful environment. Finally, a country’s security system should be advanced to make citizen feel secure 24/7 and enjoy their lives without worries even at night time. However, I believe the prosperity of a nation is the one and only thing that can make all those things happen.
In conclusion, despite the fact that governments should give attention to every aspect of a country, I believe, only a strong economy can help to see admirable results in those sectors.
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- Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 784, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03426791277 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82675907388 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573208722741 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8410192348 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.307692308 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196084768172 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681134718165 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692060365952 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119352731478 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874968203483 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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