Throughout practically all stages of a country's growth, economy always plays a crucial role among essential fields. There are individuals contend that, the growth of other specialties are as equal as the economic rise. In my point of view, I believe that the contribution of economy is the primary key of any states.
To begin with, as we can see that, domestic majors all need financial support. Thus, governments concentrate noticeably to thrive the economy to store an essential funds for supporting other fields.Government is having a lot of things need financial support. We witnessed throughout the COVID pandemic, disrupting their jobs, missing conditions get income and other circumstances exposed. In addition, although in peaceful term but we also have to manufacture or pick up weapons from other areas to prevent the civil if it suddenly occurs. Another red-flat point is about environmental preservation, they almost need budget to address these issues.
Additionally, our country will become stronger and reach out to the world. When people are in a wealthy country, they will have many ideal living conditions to live with high quality, besides that, creating opportunities to approach comprehensively the huge knowledge are around the world. Since, making geniuses to nurture where they was born in as well as in the world.
To sum up, with many givens, in my opinion, economic growth plays the most significant role. However, we should not neglect the other fields. Let’s combine everything to rise with inclusivity.
- In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development 56
- The government should sometimes infringe on people s freedom for the security of society Agree and disagree 84
- Tourists damage many historical places making them harder to preserve What are some of the reasons for this Suggest some ways to resolve this problem 56
- Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make Has this become a positive or negative development 84
- Children these days spend a lot of time apart from their parents because in many homes both parents work What problems can be caused by this What are some ways to support such children 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, thus, well, as to, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30737704918 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97770933588 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668032786885 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8512848768 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118910211224 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375917912874 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327956868602 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687926354828 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202106614804 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.