Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
While it is a common belief that economic progress plays the vital role in countries’ development and benefits the residents, I hold the view that other forms of progress are also as important goals as the former one.
There are numerous reason for authorities to consider economic progress the most important part in the development of nations. Initially, this progress is the most ubiquitous measurement status among nations, base on which, each country could be ranked respectively. Furthermore, every nations need to operate all of critical activities regarding residents’ well-being, safety and benefit. The more money financial progress can provide, the better the operation quality serve. Finally, effective economy progress in one nation could lead to improving in education, health, national defense and so on, which contribute greatly to the growth of the country and provide better living standard to people in that place.
Nevertheless, there are also numerous people in favor of other progress holding the equal role as the former one. Besides financial issues, environmental health is also a worthwhile part to be concerned as people experience health threat everyday in their life but the government only sees numbers. Moreover, money is nothing if people could not stay healthy to register the wealth they made. People should only pay money for health but not vice versa. The last but not least important form of progress to be mentioned is division of the rich and the poor. Take public and private school for instant. There is always s fact that students who are poor but have a chance to study in private school usually suffer from being bullied in at least the first week of the curriculum for being poor. Even if the nation is wealthy, without economic equality, there would still people holding rich and poor prejudice to treat others. And with that behavior, the residents in that country would gain the basic happiness in their life but trying to work harder everyday, not for themselves but for the wealth and the shame of being considered as the poor in society.
In conclusion, in spite of the crucial role of economy progress towards nations’ growth, I hold a firm in the belief that every progress are as essential towards nations’ growth as each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...rned as people experience health threat everyday in their life but the government only s...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...health but not vice versa. The last but not least important form of progress to be mentio...
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Line 5, column 1049, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...in their life but trying to work harder everyday, not for themselves but for the wealth ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, well, while, at least, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15425531915 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72929880707 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526595744681 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1253964046 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.125 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194714344883 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689837003824 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640719027701 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134009364978 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476037133328 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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