In many major cities of the world, you will find large public buildings, both new and old. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such buildings.
How important is it for a country to construct impressive public buildings when houses are want is really required?
Architecture has always been a crucial aspect of any culture. A number of large cities on the planet have old-fashioned constructions as well as brand new buildings. Both of these styles has its pros and cons that may influence the impression on public authorities, which is an important issue for most of them.
The major benefit for the society from historical buildings is the culture that is preserved in the architecture. This means that the modern generation is able to perceive a better understanding of its predecessors' preferences in visual arts. However, such buildings are usually less functional, their plans are less convenient for visitors, and they require extra attention to the conditions. For example, the crash of the tower in London was a result of bad maintenance of it, that was deteriorated by the limited public budget. Thus, additional financial expenses on historical buildings is a price for culture preservation.
On the other hand, new constructions have fewer aesthetics, in contrast to old ones. Moreover, most of the governments tend to reduce their allocations on public buildings, making their appearance worse. Hence, local budgets are available for other expenses, such as social security or public transport. According to the report of the Munich city administration, the maintenance of historical objects costs twice more than the construction of new ones. In other words, low price on new buildings entails less attractive outlook of the city.
In conclusion, both types of constructions have some benefits and drawbacks. The balance between them is the key concern of authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, look, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, as well as, in contrast to, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3671875 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15593090899 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3527208657 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.6 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276242942001 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780009531642 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048337251976 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142241978291 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558763267765 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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