Many children spend long hours on watching television for entertainment as well as educational purpose. However, in my opinion, too much of screen time is detrimental for children because it leads to ill health, decreased level of academic performance, and negative influence on character formation.
Damaging physical health is one of the major reasons why parent should set limit on children's TV time. For example, many hours viewing television may cause vision problems, postural damage, obesity, high blood pressure and diabetes mellitus. Moreover, most children become couch potatoes and lead a sedentary life style which would in turn cause many chronic illness.
In addition to damaging physical health long TV hours may cause adverse effects on children's mental and intellectual development. For example, children if islolated in front of TV screen without any social interaction, may get depressed.
Most importantly, it can lead to risky and violent behaviour among children and may develope many bad habits such as drug addiction, smoking and alcoholism. For example, children may imitate many TV series characters and select a role models from their favourite acters or actresses.
In conclusion, unlimited time in front of TV screen damages the children's physical as well as mental health. Therefore, to create a healthy educated society each parent should allow their children to engage in more meaningful outdoor activities rather than unrestricted TV time.
- Many modern children spend a great deal of time sitting in front of a television or computer screen. This is extremely harmful to their development. Therefore, parent should strictly limit the time that children spend in this way. To what extent do you ag 56
- Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school Others however say that cooperation and team working skills are more important Discuss both sides and give your opinion 83
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57079646018 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83818775533 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637168141593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5764163297 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251015109157 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105725861181 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483064339021 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147138611663 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446326397918 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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