Many museum change for admission while other are free. Do you think the advantages of changing people for admission to museums outweigh the advantages.
It is incontrovertible fact that a museum is the warehouse of knowledge. However, the given topic asserts that there are scopes to discuss whether entry to a museum should be free or not. I will examine the both points of view in upcoming paragraphs and shape up with my opinion.
To embark with, there are plethora of reasons why the museum charge are beneficial. The first and foremost, money collected from the visitors can be utilised to maintain and develop the museum. For instance, it can be used to purchasing the new equipment, repairing costs, and staff costs. Secondly, when people pay the money for entrance into a museum then, people do not do harm any things like painting, traditional things and so on. Last but not the least, they use the money to organised the exhibitions in a museum and also they provide the lot of facilities to the people like the instructor, who guide the people in better way.
On the other hand, entrance fee in museums possibly reduce the strength of people because most of the people prefer to come to places and spend time that can be entered without any money. Moreover, the tourists does no attractive towards these museums because which money they pay in that place. They spent these money to visit other popular place. Furthermore, ticket money for museum entrance discourages many students and low-income families to visit them. From this regards, charging people for visiting museums have some demerits.
In conclusion, each coin has two aspects. Noticeably, if a museums charge for entrance has some merits also it has some demerits. But, I think museums should take the small amount of fee for entrance because it create the decorum in the museum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...oney they pay in that place. They spent these money to visit other popular place. Furthermo...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...low-income families to visit them. From this regards, charging people for visiting m...
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Message: Did you mean 'creates'?
Suggestion: creates
...l amount of fee for entrance because it create the decorum in the museum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90689655172 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54383916886 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.27570222 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275916678447 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935106525959 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594346154217 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168822590037 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433936139247 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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