many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people.
Why is this case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit there places?
It is true that tourists from many parts of the world pay more visits to museums and historical places than local inhabitants. There are numbers of reasons behind this point of view, but this situation should address by attracting locals in some practical ways.
There are two primary reasons why museums and historical sites preferred more by tourists than local residents. One reason is that museums are too familiar to the locals. People are always attracted to new things so if the museums do not change anything, there is nothing new for the locals to discover. Like eating the same dish every single day they feel bored with visiting the same places. Furthermore, entrance tickets at some historical sites are expensive for the local inhabitants to afford. For example, in Dien Bien, a province in northwestern Vietnam, it is rather hard for the residents to make ends meet, let alone to spend money on visiting some famous historical attractions there.
The government should take some measures to tackle this issue effectively. Firstly, the state and local authorities should interested in innovating museums. If museums innovate, more local residents will interested in them. Secondly, historical relics need to free for all the local people. Without worrying about other expenditures, residents will pay more to visit historical sites to broaden their knowledge about their hometown.
In conclusion, there are many reasons for this. However, it should done by authorities to attract more visitors from local areas.
thanks for helping me.
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| 2019-07-11 | Esther Katlyn | 73 | view |
| 2018-12-24 | Minh meo | 56 | view |
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- many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people.Why is this case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit there places? 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26209677419 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65176386333 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8867054535 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5625 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.418424763292 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12876517214 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876682277522 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215815221418 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116967787637 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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