It is true that visiting several museums is not free of charge although there are still some of them employed free admission. This distinction has benefits and drawbacks. However, in my point of view, the benefits do outweigh the drawbacks.
Regarding the benefits, firstly, charging visitors would help the management to do maintenance for all the museum collections. For instance, in Museum Angkut (located in Batu City Indonesia) that exhibits various traditional transportations needs approximately 50 millions rupiah annually to clean up and to repair the collections. In addition, admission fee would help museums to develop its facilities like café, library, play ground and other entertainment facilities that would attract more visitors. For example, Cimory Museum in Indonesia reported to have more entertainment park and café that significantly increase their number of visitors. It is reported that the number of students who visited the museum in their holiday for education trip increased during a couple of years.
In spite of the benefits, admission fee also have drawbacks if it cost expensively. People would lost their interest in visiting museums if they have to spend more money. As a consequence, the main purpose of museums in educating people would not be fulfilled. Furthermore, if the museums belongs to private parties, it would not provide any financial gain. Also, if the museums managed by the government, they also have to spend more budget to cover the operational fee.
In conclusion, the benefits of employing admission fee for museums do outweigh its drawbacks. Hence, the governments or the private managements of the museums should consider affordable fee for people to enter museums.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rdable fee for people to enter museums.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, regarding, so, still, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44237918216 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98447959876 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553903345725 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2238022974 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34886361681 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117554667284 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733653226243 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215987306329 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650217715097 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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