Museums,being the place for history, artifacts and fossils, are preferred to visit by great deal of public but not by most, which should be the case . Some of museum take entry fee from visitors whereas the others do not. Having this seen,some of general public say this thing as profiting and has an upper hand as merits than demerits of it. I, personally do not believe so.
Charging museum comers, as I think, is more disadvantageous. First of all, if policy of admit fee to museum is applied then more of the public, which is already less, would be reluctant to come thinking that when they have to spend money so why not spend on something such as movies or shopping. Not just that, it will reduced faith of citizens towards government as providing money to run is duty of authorities, they reckon.
Moreover,places like museum should be as parks or other public facilities where masses can go more and more without inhibition and when they are charged the real aim: to avail visitors with knowledge, would be unfilled as less of public would go there in limited number or would not go even, which is a great loss to country as its native would be less aware about its past, culture and tradition.
So, in essence, it can be said that charging commons to enter into museums, which can be good at first but will not be later, is not a good idea and if it is to be done then a reasonable amount should be maintained to all and everybody.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1191.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59845559846 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59032121261 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602316602317 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.371901405 49.4020404114 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.875 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.375 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103440469883 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622981851853 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577406835742 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638247792459 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284085355073 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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