In today's world people more interest to visit museums and the historical sites rather than the past, accordingly many galleries open their doors to the public for free while the other not, in my belief there are many benefits in charging people to visit the museums.
On the bright side, museums are collecting items from all over the world and sometimes they have to buy those objects from private owners or governments. For example, a Private owner maybe has an antique thing from a specific period like the peace of porcelain plate from China with handmade painting on it, so museum needs a month of money to buy such a beautiful object from the collector or antique dealer to put them in the museum for showing to the public. In addition,
it is helping to improve society's interact with the community when they pay money to visit events in museums. For instance, famous museums like Louvre, Metropolitan or national Museum of Egypt they are not free to visit for the public they need this money to expand their collection and throwing huge galleries in order to raise money for charities like Gallas party in New York City which is through by Metropolitan museum every year.
On the negative side, people who live in a city that has a big museum sometimes avoid going to the museum because of the entrance price which in there believe it is not fair. As an illustration, people who have always been enthusiastic about free events like concerts, theater and they prefer to spend their money on something else instead pay to visit an old dusty object from the past.
In conclusion, although there are side effects on taking money for public to visiting of museums like losing people interest to art and human history, in my opinion, the benefits are more for local communities and private sector who run such a place, in order to keep them safe and appreciate the artist and history of world, people should pay money to visit the museums.
- More and more people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes and other items. What are the reasons for this? Is this a negative or positive trend? 89
- Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good, while others think there are disadvantagesDiscuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 84
- Some people from poor and rural backgrounds find it difficult to get a university education. Universities have to make it easier, especially for such groups, to get into them.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, may, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74117647059 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3673017651 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.8479837265 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 201.5 106.682146367 189% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 20.7667163134 205% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.375 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232376786974 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10787512042 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668741304259 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142621074981 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419285868186 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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