Many offendres commit more crimes after serving the first punishment , why this is happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem
It is unquestionable that criminals commit more crimes after releasing first time from prisons. While there are various reasons for this trend, some effective measure can be taken by governments to tackle this situation.
The most obvious reason of reoffending is that prisoners meet each other when they locked up. They share their experiences and how they committed the crime because of this they learn new procedures and different techniques to commit the illegal act. For instance, a study have been shown that people can easily inspire from the surroundings thus when criminal come first time in prison, they try to mimic or learn from dangerous prisoners. Another noticeable reason is that when offenders release from prison, they would have difficulty to obtain employment due to bad criminal record or lack of the education and skills.
To tackle this issue, government should take a initiatives. They could arrange special rehabilitation programs in prison in order to teach them valuable skills including basic computers training, or they can offer some diploma programs such as how to maintain the cars and graphic designing . They could also introduce health related programs such as how to manage the stress level or how to control the anger. Furthermore, prisons should have some rules and regulation about dangerous criminal, they could have separate place from first time offenders. Community service is another way to reform offenders, rather than they locked up in prison, they should have opportunity to meet people in community and serve them, this trend will eliminate the negative influence prisoner would have.
In conclusion, reoffender is one of the major problem in our society, but it can be tackled by introducing the rehabilitation and community services.
- Some people think that travel is necessary to learn about other nation other believe that tv and internet are best way to learn about country discuss both views and give opinion 67
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- Children can learn effectively from watching television which is why it should be encouraged at school and at home To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 81
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ckle this issue, government should take a initiatives. They could arrange special...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a initiative' or simply 'initiatives'?
Suggestion: a initiative; initiatives
...ckle this issue, government should take a initiatives. They could arrange special rehabilitat...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... maintain the cars and graphic designing . They could also introduce health relate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34982332155 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72609808912 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1192542796 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.166666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188425041983 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852447876288 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890242123988 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165350653538 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130939273903 0.056905535591 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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