Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of a nation’s history. However, some people think old builds should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices.
How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?
Numerous ancient buildings are sheltered by law due to the fact that they are part of a state's history, nevertheless, several individuals assume that these buildings are supposed to be knocked down in order to render more opportunities to build a new building since people need more amenities. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain the essential of these buildings and also put forward the reason of history which should stand together with the advancement.
To begin with, I personally consider that the existence of the ancient buildings are absolutely pivotal for every nation across the globe as it is capable of bestowing various positive impacts for all countries. According to this impact, it, first and foremost, is going to produce a specific identity for the nation. It, second but not less crucial, is capable of attracting holidaymakers to come which in the end, it will provide more opportunities for all individuals to create a business which related to these buildings.
Furthermore, I tend to think that all histories of every state have to be maintained properly as the enhancement of the country improved. In accordance with previous statement, I believe that the presence of every country’s history is going to create a fruitful value for all citizens, particularly for the education of future generation.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that the management of the ancient building are needed to be done in order to render more advantages to all country. Thus, we, as a part of the society, have to control and maintain it together with the authority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'states'' or 'state's'?
Suggestion: states'; state's
...due to the fact that they are part of a states history, nevertheless, several individu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10606060606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98800018193 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537878787879 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.9899948799 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.777777778 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20106262493 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787991752837 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686349160699 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118400186103 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613153238389 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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