Many old cities around the world are going through a major process of modernization. What are the advantages and disadvantages of modernization?
Across the globe, a trend of several traditional cities turning into state-of-art places can be observed. While these areas offer a safe environment besides more job opportunities, their demerits of not only lacking the tranquil atmosphere but also uniqueness cannot be overlooked.
The revamped cities are, indubitable, more secure. This because of the improved architecture of the modern buildings, hi-tech road system with automatic traffic lights and CCTV cameras along with effective medical services. All these are resulting in lesser loss of life than before.
Moreover, the employment opportunities are more. Owing to the setup of industries in places lacking enough employers before, more youth has been able to join the workforce. For instance, has Gurgaon not gone through industrialization recently, it could not have provided thrice the number of jobs than those available there before. Consequently, with more income from taxes, these urban areas are adding to the national exchequer.
Despite the aforementioned benefits, the localities are deprived of their mental peace. Its reason is the surging competition among people, propelling them to work harder, or among organizations, creating high noise levels coming from production or construction sites, thus, causing psychological disorders for the residents. In a study conducted in numerous cities, the calmest people were found to be enjoying their time in older cities.
In addition to the peaceful environment, these lack uniqueness. With common technology used for all buildings and roads, outside travellers soon get bored of similar-looking areas, which adversely affects the tourism industry and the people involved in it.
In recapitulate, this essay has covered two areas: the upsides of modern cities, which include more safety and chances to work for its people; and their downsides, which consist of missing both peace and their own identity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: BORED_OF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'bored with'?
Suggestion: bored with
... and roads, outside travellers soon get bored of similar-looking areas, which adversely ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6323024055 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96273346537 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683848797251 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.47464115 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.266666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0503759561978 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0151044384966 0.084324248473 18% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221692528844 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0258418036901 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251057438101 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.6 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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