There is no doubt that home schooling has become a preferred method for teaching the children who are bullied from classmates or disabled. However, I am convinced that a role of school would give the children more benefits than home schooling.
The view of the children who are going to the school can be widened by various curriculum. For example, the school authorities have various subjects and efficacious education systems, and they believe that these educational factors can give the children find faster ways that they want to do.
Since the time in childhood is limited, it would be effective way to go to school.
Moreover, they need to lean about communication skills. The majority of school not only teach a range of subjects but also provide
opportunities to be familiar with other classmates by attending many activities such as volunteer work and school trip.
On the other hand, it is often claimed that home schooling can make the children pay more concentration on their work.
This is because once the children make a choice something they want to do, they would spent most of the time to learn only fewer subjects under the supervision of their parents. The parents may also believe that the time for other subjects would be waste of time.
In addition, for one, this system can be impact on the children who are disabled or a victim from violence in school due to the problem of discrimination.
However, the disadvantage of home schooling should not be overlooked because most parents tend to work both, thus they do not have enough time to take care of their children all day. If it would be able for parents to teach their children, most parents can not become a specialist in various field.
- More and more people want to buy famous brands with clothes, car and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? 56
- some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people.do you agree or disagree? 61
- Many parents choose to teach their children at home rather than sending their children to school, do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh its drawbacks? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ach a range of subjects but also provide opportunities to be familiar with other ...
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Line 9, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k and school trip. On the other hand, it is often claimed that home schooling ...
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Line 10, column 87, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...e something they want to do, they would spent most of the time to learn only fewer su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87796610169 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64316803465 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515254237288 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1208856666 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275885648381 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112596485871 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679372376869 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123891752679 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786082905575 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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