Many parents choose to think their children at home rather than sending their children to school . do you think the benefits of homeschooling outweigh the drawbacks
In the epoch, education is vital role in children life,however, many guardians give preference to teach their children at homes rather than choosing education centre for them. according to me demerits outrace of merits , because everyone needs educational environment which parents cannot provide it. i will explain it in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, one predominate reason for teaching children at their home that is children strengthen their relations with family members. To explicate, if anyone thought by parents at their homes then they can spend their more time with knowperson rather than spending time in schools. Secondly, who child teaches in homeshool. they will more selfdepended in their upcoming life rather than those students who take classes in schools.
On the other hand, there is prominent factors which agree with taught should be in schools.Chiefly, homeshool would be negative effect on students manners such as, discipline,how can treat with others and how they can give respect to elders. without these manners anyone will not success in future. In addition, some parents are not well educated they do not able to give proper education to their children. Apart from this, parents never make educational environment ( like schools ) in home. Finally, if students attend classes at their home then they cannot participate during the compition ( which are inaugurated by traniers at education center ) and learner cannot judge theirselves.
In an conclusion, parents and schools are play equal role in child,s life ,however, education centers are more necessary for everyone life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, apart from, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44979919679 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75259586572 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610441767068 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3003092818 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.384615385 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282807636772 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100581582259 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974939578135 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171883578271 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869624323767 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.