In modern society, the number of children and teenagers engaging in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. There are several reasons for this problem, and punishment should be taken to flog young criminals.
There are several reasons why a number of children and teenagers involving in illegal activities grow today. Firstly, in modern life, parents have to sustain more financial pressure. Many mothers and fathers are too busy to earn money so that they do not have enough time to take care of their children. For example, my ant works all day, not looking after her son so that my cousin has game addiction, and he stolen his mother’s money in order to spend on playing game. Secondly, the young watch increasingly the violent films. When children and teenagers follow a film, they cannot aware of what are illegal actions in film without parents’ guide. As a result, the young tends to mimic the criminal actions of characters, leading to illegal actions in real life.
Children and teenagers are too young in order to receive serious punishments such as the death penalty and putting in prison so that they should receive educational punishments. Primarily, young criminals should do community service such as cleaning the roads and growing trees. Secondly, children and teenagers involving in illegal activities force to be sent to community centers where they are educated as serious as penalty. When the young criminals live and study in community centers, they are tightly controlled and taught how to become a good citizen.
In conclusion, there are many reasons why the young criminal rates are increasingly, and families and society need to consider how they are punished.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with, with respect to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30476190476 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85834895178 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.3219961314 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.25 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251782283437 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815200665979 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715107148342 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126421832771 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535236595056 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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