In many parts of the world there is continuous coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sports themselves.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Recently, interest in sport games is increasing dramatically. In order to satisfy people wishes the novel and complicated facilities are being created. The one of the eminent features is continuously coverage of sport on television. Some people believe that adolescences become more dependent on television, therefore, I personally think that television channels may not discourage the sport-lovers as the intrinsic issue is whether the youths love sports deeply.
First of all, saturation with various types of sport programs lead teenagers to spend their time on watching television channels. In the upshot, this convenience restricts the young people by motionless and long-term sitting in front of screen, which is detrimental for health at all, instead of attending in any sport themselves. For instance, infant spends time on watching channels, similarly, this leads them may not to have a spare time on outdoor facilities, as a result television may cause avoiding themselves in sports.
From one perspective, television programs can be considered as a motivation to juveniles. While watching screen they can copy the role models action, behavior and style, which is basement in their own way and bring it back to their practical. Likewise, in order to provide youths with such knowledge, sport channels should give opportunities to deal with training as well as instructing programs. From other perspectives, there are a great number of disabled all over the world. Such programs give them chance to reach complacency by watching, instead of attending. There are many facts about the man in wheelchair, who suffered by paralysis, is being inspired by role models, subsequently, this lead them to begin to move.
In conclusion, the positive signs from sport channels overweight the detriments. The given afore opinions depict that sport programs should be increased rather than diminished, whereas, this would be beneficial to all abled as well as disabled people too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, likewise, may, similarly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4512987013 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98169168868 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9767469377 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.933333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277387403704 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845702118456 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606561537056 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160460874383 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499305473865 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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