In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin.
Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society.
In the present days, there is a beneficial trade for skin lightening or whitening products in different places of the world. In this essay the several causes of this problem will be discussed considering the effects in the health of the human as well as in the society they live.
The main cause of trending such skin brightening products is the society which consider white skin tone as fair. People are just social being who wants themselves to be more considered and liked by the society; so they want to try everything they can for this reason. By the way of illustration, we can notice that there are more number of likes in the facebook pictures of a white girl in compare to that of warm and black skinned people. The another reason is the deceptive advertisements by the companies doing business of such products. They hire an actor or actress with huge fan following and mislead about the results of getting white skin which provokes the fans to get attracted to these products and buy them eventually. For instance, there is a popular advertisement of beauty product for men titled “fair and handsome” in which the Bollywood superstar Shah Rukh Khan suggest the men to glow their skin using the cream so that women will be easily attracted to them.
Such items have a direct affect on health, specially the skin of the person using it. Different type of skin allergies, pimples and other skin diseases can appear in such skin which make the result just opposite of the expectations. My cousin was fond of using these products but I never applied anything like that. She has got several pimples on her face which has made her uglier. Now people appreciates my clear and naturally clean skin over her skin. Moreover, these products directly or indirectly affects the economy of the society. People try other products to get rid of the side effect of the beauty products they previously used. To regain the smooth health condition of their skin they need to care it more. For this, they try to buy medicines and other items. Some have to take appointment of the doctor. This causes a loss of a lot of time and money.
To recapitulate, there are several reasons behind the beneficial market of beauty products. Also, there are effects of these products on society and health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74686716792 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51915981377 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528822055138 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6085475175 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1904761905 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397935873491 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111111947518 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694235240046 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250357736333 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282749126735 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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