In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people's skin outline the reason for using products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society
Nowadays, there is a growing sale of skin products in the market across the globe. Some people consider that the use of these products will make their skin colour light and white. Looking beautiful is the reason of purchasing such products, however these products damage a person's skin and also have negative impact on society.
The primary reason of using beauty product is for looking beautiful. It is the common perception among the society that the white people are more desirable and rich as compared to dark complexion people. For instance; if a person have dark skin complexion, so sometime they will face some problem like unemployment, because people feel about darker people that they are less intelligent. Hence, individuals use skincare products.
There are innumerable effects of applying cosmetic products on body. This products are made by countless chemicals that are not skin friendly, as a result it effects negatively on individual's skin such as skin cancer and allergy. These effects take a lot of time to recover, even sometime it gone hardly. Beside this, The perception of individual about darker people, not only promotes the colourism in society but also makes a person low in self-esteem. Thus, these are the reasons and effects of skin products.
To conclude, after scrutinizing the viewpoint, it is witnessed that people purchase skincare products to develop their personality. However, not only these cosmetic effects adversely on people's skin but also negatively effects on society.
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- In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people s skin outline the reason for using products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society 56
- Many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or vitamin people skin outline the reason for using products and discuss what effects they have in term of health and society 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 69, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
... of applying cosmetic products on body. This products are made by countless chemical...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, look, so, thus, even so, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69227481739 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2473281367 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3076009099 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114079791237 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591561138865 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194853017132 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410463197875 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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