In many parts of the world, water sources are becoming more polluted.
What are the consequences of this problem ?
What can be done to combat it?
Sequence of natural disasters happen very often these days. However, millions of people are still ignorant about these cases, so, there are no changes or solutions to combat it. One of the disaster that can turn into irreversible situation is polluted water sources. Because of it, the consequences will affect abundant of people. Therefore, people, including the governments, are still trying to seek a solution to tackle this given situation.
Numerous water sources are becoming more polluted around the world. It can be caused by tons of rubbish that thrown away into water sites everyday, moreover, industrial wastes, which are thrown away straight into the water sources without being filtrated. Therefore, water is being contaminated with rubbish items and it can degrade the water concentration. Not to mention, that the organisms, which also live in the water, might be dead due to the chemical polluted water. Futhermore, the water can bring severe diseases if it is used or consumed by people near to the sources, for example, diarrhea, accute stomachache, and so on.
Since years ago, various of things have already been tried to reduce the probability of water gets polluted, but little of them are succesful. The governments can try and give their contribution by strengthen the law for industries or factories, they have to follow the regulation of having to filtrate and recycle the waste, or give them a special site for throwing away the waste. If they do not coorperate, punishment such as have to pay a fine is a suitable one.
Overall, if governments are happened to make more law regarding to this situation, it will be better for the environment, especially for water sources. If so, there will be a chance when we can have a clean and non chemical water sources within years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...bbish that thrown away into water sites everyday, moreover, industrial wastes, which are...
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Line 5, column 164, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...them are succesful. The governments can try and give their contribution by strengthen t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05016722408 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74986767676 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591973244147 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0099989586 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254667193735 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908151666312 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849134713296 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141587944214 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901000700373 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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