Many people are afraid to leave their home because of crime. Some believe that more action can be taken to prevent crime while other feel that little action can be done to stop crime. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Increasing crime wave restrict the people to come out of their houses. It is believed by some that multifarious actions are required to be taken to combat crime, whereas other felt that less number of actions can also help to curb the crime. In my opinion, enforcement of strict laws as well as harsh penalities would act as deterrent, however rehabiliation activites can be adopted in some cases.
It is evident that by enforcing stricts laws along with stringent punishment by goverment will help in preventing criminal activities. To elaborate, if jury of the nation is allowed to give capital as well as corporal punishments to the offenders of heinious crime, which will leave impact on the mind of wrong doers to think twice before violating any law. To cite an example, about 80% of crime rate is controlled in the countries, which introduced death sentence and life sentence as punishment for violent crimes
On the flip side, crime can be curbed with some actions by society and regime. What's more, no one is criminal by birth. Major root cause of law offending acts are poverty and illiteracy. It can be seen that most of the criminals are from poor strata of society. To elaborate, they do these kinds of offences because of lack of education and due to unemployment. Thus, by providing education and employment opportunities to them, crime rate could be controlled. To illustrate, 85% of criminal never indulge in illegal activities after releasing from imprisonment, if they are provided with appropriate rehabilitation services such as conselling sessions, vocational studies during imprisonment.
To conclude, government should impose life sentences or death penalities, if crime is harsh, otherwise it is not recommended to put a person behind the bars. Even a criminal has the right to change his mind for rest of his life by rehabilitation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09120521173 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96415148364 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622149837134 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5316087166 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.642857143 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335308583924 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0982358161438 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107307236309 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1850471586 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127639644187 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.