Many people are afriad to leave home because of crimes Some believe that more action should be taken to prevent crimes but others feel little can be done Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Nowadays ,some people do not want to go outside du...
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...event crimes as opposed to implementing less measures.While there are some benefits ...
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...s opposed to implementing less measures.While there are some benefits to keep current...
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... some benefits to keep current situation,I believe taking more actions to combat c...
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...actions to combat crimes is essential. Criminals will not be deterrent effecti...
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...mes is essential. Criminals will not be deterrent effectively if our governme...
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...ur government do not take more measures.Our society do not have harsh laws today. P...
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... because they think they have chances to escape punishment.For example, crimes ma...
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...they have chances to escape punishment.For example, crimes may come into citizens ...
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...itizens apartments and steal valuables. even if they were caught by the polices ,th...
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...teal valuables. even if they were caught by the polices ,they should only have se...
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...d only have served a short prison term. Therefore crimes are not afraid of being punished...
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...d be responsible for taking more actions ,such as revising existing laws,setting p...
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...cers in the community and so on. Firstly,these measures can help build a harmonious so...
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...res can help build a harmonious society.For example, armed police can shoot an esca...
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...g harmful to innocent citizens. This can protect the public and make the communit...
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...ommunity a safer place to live. Secondly,government can also strengthen the laws and provid...
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...the laws and provide vocational training,which provide more chances to potential offen...
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...use there are many crimes in our society ,a large number of citizens do not dare t...
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...e there are many crimes in our society ,a large number of citizens do not dare to leave home.To c...
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...r of citizens do not dare to leave home.To change the present situation ,different...
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...ave home.To change the present situation ,different people have different views ,I...
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...n ,different people have different views ,I believe our government should take re...
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...t people have different views ,I believe our government should take responsible f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37354085603 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93014969345 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5953307393 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3085290431 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.545454545 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264497212566 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998064126032 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760895360674 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173711875299 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593655104405 0.056905535591 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.