many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals.Do you agree or disagree? why?
One of the highly controversial issues these days relates to whether or not training dolphins to perform in circus my harm them and should no longer be a common practice. Some people believe that when dolphins are educated to perform in shows, they are acting unnatural, and when they conduct such circus acts they may in fact be in pain. I agree entirely with this opinion due to several reasons that I will discuss in greater detail in my essay.
First of all, it is globally known that animals kept into captivity are never happy nor they enjoy their living state. There is not a single zoo or aquarium in which animals feel loved and taken care of, let alone feeling free, and that is because keeping them out of their natural state is undoubtedly cruel. But when performing in circus acts is added to the captivity state, some animals may suffer more than others, specifically dolphins. Trainers work hard to teach those animals choreographies and spectacular performances for the amusement of the public, but most of the time those poor mammals are just being played with for food.
Although some dolphins are rescued and medicated before being put into circuses and zoos, and some others are even born captive for the preservation of the species, I strongly believe that it would make a tremendous impact on those species if they were instated into nature. One good illustration of what could be done differently in those cases is what has been done with the breeding of pandas. In order to preserve the species, pandas are kept captive for the duration of the gestation, and after a year from birth, they are reinstated in their habitat. this allows them to be kept safe but then try to live a normal life.
After having discussed the most pertinent point of this issue, I feel that the only logical conclusion is that circuses should not train animals like dolphins to perform for them anymore as it puts them in more danger than good.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, then, i feel, in fact, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73529411765 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40938907388 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573529411765 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1014992604 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.166666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140775336549 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501951916633 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052171110584 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0933968621454 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595466506753 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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