Many people assume that the goal of every country should be to produce more materials and goods. To what extend do you think this is an appropriate goal.
In today’s modern society the problem of overproduction, become more and more serious, especially in developed countries where technical progress practically rich a peak. The purpose of this essay is to investigate the positive and negative effects of such phenomena.
The process of goods and materials production could be advantageous in some certain aspects. The first thing to be considered is that due to the increasing of production opportunity, developing countries could strengthen their positions in the world community and make situation in their economy much more better. Furthermore, one convincing argument in favour of producing more materials and goods is the fact, that people who live in such countries could afford buying the variety of different products and they also have the ability to choose their consumer basket.
From an opposite angle the disadvantages of the overproduction are varied. The main argument in favour of an appropriate goal of production is that in such situation could form excess market demand therefore many products would not be bought and for this reason unused goods would accumulate in the dumps and pollute the planet. Another negative aspect of this phenomenon is the ability of large companies to manipulate the market that is why prices could be too high for the consumers.
Taking everything into consideration, it can be concluded that the phenomenon of goods and materials productions could have both positive and negative aspects. From the one side developing countries could make their economic situation better and can afford the variety of goods for their citizens, nevertheless overproduction could be harmful for the environment situation of our planet and cold effect negatively on the market equilibrium.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to buy'.
Suggestion: to buy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47636363636 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00860693719 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523636363636 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.206908492 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.6 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205758764089 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828331396244 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416700611868 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121773514644 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381361793983 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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