In the contemporary era, the life becomes more critical pertained to tackle all situations. It is considered by some mankinds that the cooking skill should be taught to the students while others doubt that it is like a wastage of time. In my perspective, the cooking skill is essential to be learnt by all the people. To herald the beginning, some people support the opinion that the children should have the quality regarding to cook the numerous foods. This is because the students have to live alone without the parents to take the higher studies. To cite an example, nowadays, the cooking relates programmes are also shown through the enormous medias. It is therefore clear that the knowledge of cooking should be elevated by the schools. In contrast, some individuals believe that the cooking leads a wastage of time. As, the life of youngsters are becoming more stressful related to main works so that they have no time to learn the cooking. Moreover, the seniors also employ the servants for this work. As an illustration, currently, competition becomes more higher then the new creativities are adopted by the youngsters which make them lessen thinkful about the cooking life skill. As a consequence, these are the numerous reasons which change the cooking skills into a wasteful things. To recapitulate, the cooking becomes more trended. Although, the youngsters have busy in their life but, in my opinion, they should have to take interest in the cooking life skill.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, while, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00406504065 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67402131246 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532520325203 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9742549587 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9285714286 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27769280403 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937798874416 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630421625587 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27769280403 0.151304729494 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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