many people believe that formal pen and paper examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement What is your view of educational achievement

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many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement.
What is your view of educational achievement?

It goes without saying that examinations play a crucial role in assessing the
educational results in most countries. One of the common types of examination is
the customary test with pen and paper. Although it is not stranger to students,

this test is still considered unsuitable these days, according to some adverse
impacts that it brings about.

The main function of formal “pen and paper” examination is believed to revise
students’ knowledge throughout the learning process; however, its consequences
are not as beneficial as people expect. Most examinations nowadays include such
theoretical questions resulting in rote learning because they are often
predictable. Therefore, students mean to use this passive way of learning in order
to get a high mark. However, it will prevent them from understanding the essence
and thinking how to solve problems themselves. Moreover, the unemployment

rate is also an effect of theoretical exams which have no practicality. Students will
totally be jobless if they can not put knowledges into practice. Nowadays, besides
the degree, having experience is also an essential demand for employees to get
jobs.

In addition, traditional examinations can not measure students’ abilities exactly
because each student has his own strengths. Some are good at writing but others
express themselves much better verbally. Hence, schools need to have various
formats to assess students. For example, oral exams, not only to measure
students’ knowledge but also help them cultivate their presentation skill.

To sum up, formal “pen and paper” examinations have considerable drawbacks
that need improving. It is also essential to find suitable ways to assess students in
overview.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Rate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in addition, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7566539924 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01910718067 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661596958175 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7740076649 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.625 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148445477897 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466201877755 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629441596276 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04237604004 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667254330847 0.056905535591 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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