many people believe that government banks provide more security than private banks.some says that private banks are more reliable. discuss and give your opinion.
In the comparison of government banks and private banks on the elements like trustworthy and safety, government banks are more trustable, reliable and safe than private banks. Though according to me government banks offer more security.
From the past research on the banks safety and facilities it is found that upto some extent private banks as good as government banks. As the government is involved, if any kind of worst happened with the bank bank holders don't have to be afraid that much because government payback some amount around 50-70%. Moreover, government security systems are well developed and sophisticated than some of the private banks which has old and naive security facilities. One more example of reliability on government banks is it provides better safety lockers with advanced technology.
on the other hand, upto some extent I believe some private banks provide advanced safety. Although, the major drawback of the private banks regardless of the safety from the theft if bank owner cheats than there is 100% possibilities to loss the money. In such cases many times account holder don't get the refund and they have to suffer a lot of woe. So in private banks there is wast possibilities of damage to ornaments stored in banks.
In conclusion,the benifits of government banks covers up the many of the private banks benifits thus,in my opinion government banks are more reliable and safe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68959991101 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525862068966 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0675780142 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.363636364 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.488534360495 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215125977927 0.084324248473 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0996136105511 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.347654233332 0.151304729494 230% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562422102998 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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