many people believe that the increasing number of cars in cities is the biggest source of pollution and waste others think that industries are the ones causing pollution discuss both views and give your opinion
pollution that which is increasing rapidly is the most threatening issue the world faces today, in this modern era.the large amount of cars and compunies both are samly increasing day-by-day at the satisfactory level. this is the biggest problem to increased pollution today.
first and foremost it is irrefutable that there are number of points among them the main point is in this 21 country the number of horseless caeeiage are enlargement in cities day-by-day.people used to cars for there pasnal work,office work and so on.and also cars should be forsake the carbondioxide and other some gases in the air.because carbondioxide and other gases should be harmful in our body. foe exampul the large amont of people in delhi people have became harful to the cars pollution . 56% people can be cancer patients in delhi and also delhi is the second pollution city in the world.
secondly, there are number of pollutions in industries in the world like chemical industry and so on the highest amount of gases forsake the pollution and waste they should be spred the toxic gases and carbondioxide in the air. this types 0f gases might be effects in the our body, there are number of pollution like water pollution, airpollution and so on, and air pollution is the biggest problem in the world. foe example in india the high amount of industries have been spred the pollution like anar chemical compny. they can spred the large amount of wasteg chemical in the water.
to conclude, in my point of view industries is the biggest ones causing pollution in the world among them cars pollution. the large amount of waste can be spred in the air and water and cars are spred only two types gases like carbondioxide and noice pollution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92203389831 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66791804702 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433898305085 0.561755894193 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.7168027716 49.4020404114 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288854629784 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131939185214 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071887991758 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184275603351 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0102062923588 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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