Many people believe that the increasing use of modern technology at work and in leisure is reducing people's creativity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's era, it has witnessed the rapidly increasing speed of modern technology but some hold the view that the use of it whether at work deprives individuals of creativity.
advanced technology has changed the world life a lot such as the convenient transportation, speeded up with three folds even more in comparison with it before, communication that no matter when and where we are we can talk with one we intend, shortening the distance and more food production based on the modern technology used in agriculture. To be honest, it really tremendously improved and developed our life.
However, it also reduces our creativity. There is a programme that can compose music tunes with various musical styles and audience can't distinguish whether it is composed by machine or musician. More stunningly, it has the ability to compose classical music like Bach and Mozart, fooling people that it is really composed by them, as if it is the tremendous masterpiece forgotten by the time but now appears. it is the same condition in other art works like paintings and sculpture. The machine equipped with modern and advanced technology achieves a high level in some fields. The great works are created by technology instead of human, lacking the process of taking efforts, the emotion and the unique thoughts, sounding really ridiculous and absurd. while the thinking of technology takes the place of human's thinking, how terrible! but the thing happens. individuals are accustomed to using machines to finish and achieve their task when in work and their work creativity may gradually fade away with the template project overflowing with all aspects of careers. In leisure time, people kill time when using smart phones and in most of this process, they lose enthusiasm of creating but only feel bored.
As far as I'm concerned, I agree over that people are away from creativity while advanced technology occupies our time and life with its great convenience. The thoughts which we own gradually dissipate if we aren't aware of the circumstance that technology results in laziness. Of course, it doesn't mean technology is like a monster, despite it has lots of benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, thus, while, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12044817927 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80687643898 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.853704245 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.866666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203016643549 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064975827086 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052142646919 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131654989455 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591954415717 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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