Nowadays, everyone especially teenagers are
strongly
influenced by the news covered by media related to any
celebrity
. A plethora of
people
think
that these coverages affect the youngsters
extremely
badly
. I do believe that these broadcasts have both beneficial and adverse impact over every generation. Suitable points with supporting examples
are mentioned
in this essay in forthcoming paragraphs. Beginning with, juvenile who are not mature
enough
to compare right and incorrect
get
easily
diverted by watching
celebrities
on television or any
social
network. To elaborate it, youngsters try to compare themselves with the
celebrities
in the field of money, skin, body and numerous more.
Teenagers
tend to copy the stars and
sometimes
this leads to wastage of money or time of the youth on even they
risk
their
own
lives
to be like
celebrity
.
For instance
, in America more than 2 lakh teens had plastic surgery last year due to
get
influenced by models on
social
network.
Thus
, media coverages of
celebrities
have adverse effect on adolescent.
On the contrary
,
some
actions broadcasted on
social
media can have a
good
and
positive
impact on young ones.
In other words
, gestures regarding charity and helping nature shown over the
social
platform can increase
positive
deeds performed by children.
For example
, Cristiano Ronaldo, a well-known football player donates blood
regularly
, and he even refuses to
get
any tattoo in order that he can donate his blood to the needy.
Hence
, a number of
good
activities can effect
positively
on
teenagers
.
In conclusion
, I
partially
agree
with the statement
given
above. I consider that as a coin have two sides and same for the news and forecasts about the
celebrities
can have two distinct and beneficial results as it can influence child in a
good
or a
bad
way. Nowadays, everyone
especially
teenagers
are
strongly
influenced by the news covered by media related to any
celebrity
. A plethora of
people
think
that these coverages affect the youngsters
extremely
badly
. I do believe that these broadcasts have both beneficial and adverse impact over every generation. Suitable points with supporting examples
are mentioned
in this essay in forthcoming paragraphs. Beginning with, juvenile who are not mature
enough
to compare right and incorrect
get
easily
diverted by watching
celebrities
on television or any
social
network. To elaborate it, youngsters try to compare themselves with the
celebrities
in the field of money, skin, body and numerous more.
Teenagers
tend to copy the stars and
sometimes
this leads to wastage of money or time of the youth on even they
risk
their
own
lives
to be like
celebrity
.
For instance
, in America more than 2 lakh teens had plastic surgery last year due to
get
influenced by models on
social
network.
Thus
, media coverages of
celebrities
have adverse effect on adolescent.
On the contrary
,
some
actions broadcasted on
social
media can have a
good
and
positive
impact on young ones.
In other words
, gestures regarding charity and helping nature shown over the
social
platform can increase
positive
deeds performed by children.
For example
, Cristiano Ronaldo, a well-known football player donates blood
regularly
, and he even refuses to
get
any tattoo in order that he can donate his blood to the needy.
Hence
, a number of
good
activities can effect
positively
on
teenagers
.
In conclusion
, I
partially
agree
with the statement
given
above. I consider that as a coin have two sides and same for the news and forecasts about the
celebrities
can have two distinct and beneficial results as it can influence child in a
good
or a
bad
way.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 41.998997996 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3726.0 1615.20841683 231% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 592.0 315.596192385 188% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.29391891892 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78742417175 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.307432432432 0.561755894193 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 986.4 506.74238477 195% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 26.0 4.76152304609 546% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2939974727 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.2 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56666666667 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 54.0 4.38176352705 1232% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 111.0 5.01903807615 2212% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21454080331 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732279169176 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059533882845 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0372447141878 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559841298517 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.2 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.