Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 10.4138276553 250% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 94.0 41.998997996 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3726.0 1615.20841683 231% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 592.0 315.596192385 188% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.29391891892 5.12529762239 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93265142912 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78742417175 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.307432432432 0.561755894193 55% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 986.4 506.74238477 195% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 26.0 4.76152304609 546% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2939974727 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.2 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56666666667 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 54.0 4.38176352705 1232% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 111.0 5.01903807615 2212% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21454080331 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732279169176 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059533882845 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0372447141878 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559841298517 0.056905535591 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.2 12.4159519038 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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