Many people believe that most social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In our progressive life, a wide range of social networking sites, including Facebook, are accessible for almost everyone. However, most of the world's population think that easy-contact internet sites have had a negative influence on individuals and society.
Social medias have had a beneficiary impact on business, education and social life. Firstly, communication sites allow business related people in different countries to interact without even face-to-face meetings. Secondly, websites, like Zoom, give new opportunities for relationships between students and teachers. For instance, a pupil can take video lessons with a teacher despite the distances between them. Finally, many people utilize public sites for being aware of last news regarding the policy, science or fashion life. That is enough to check personal profiles daily for awareness of recent reports.
On the one hand, many people these days care too much about their persona, and how many likes they receive. Young people, rather than mixing with their peers, seeking " virtual" friendships. Teenagers and at the same time adults value themselves by online followers. Experts insist that posting pictures (in sites like Facebook, Instagram) of daily funs, such as vacations, parties and material values, forces people of lower backgrounds to reduce self-esteem. On the other hand, the availability of modern communication technologies has the result of isolating people from real life. Inhabitants do not have to put efforts to offer them to buy abroad tickets for visiting their friends and relatives. Due to this, bonds among human beings become weaker.
In conclusion, I believe that social networking sites have had a bad impact in our life but they also can be useful and helpful, if we do not overuse them and overestimate their capabilities.
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Hi, everyone! I'm Khushnud…
Hi, everyone! I'm Khushnud and I'm an IELTS instructor. This is my first attempt to have my student's essay checked. I'm deeply grateful for the creators of this website for their great contribution in learning progress of IELTS candidates.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...r almost everyone. However, most of the worlds population think that easy-contact inte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51418439716 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8647237249 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695035460993 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3773087755 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5625 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253451618442 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682163545475 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714365683344 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162498768782 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479697000433 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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