Many people believe that the next world war will happen as a result of conflicts over water. Is this fear justified? Give reasons for your answer.
In the present age, a question “What conflict would result the next world war?”, has sparked much
debate. Most presume that the next world war will be a result of conflicts over water. It is judicious
to consider the statement and personally, I am in favor with it.
The primary factor we need to take into consideration is that water is an essential element for a
living being. First and foremost, springs, rivers, lakes and wells are the sources where people can
get water easily. Furthermore, most countries rely on fast flowing rivers to generate electricity.
Closer examination would reveal that without clean water resources, even irrigation would be an
arcane process. However, due to turbulent industrialization and unmanageable urbanization, most of
these sources are getting polluted and shriveled.
Evidently, most of the powerful countries are disposing nuclear wastes in the sources of clean water.
It is also evident that some countries have even changed the course of river for their benefit. These
activities somehow, in future may cause scarcity of water as well as natural disaster. There is no
denying that some maverick countries will fight against these atrocities. To be more exact, discord
among countries about the conflict over water would rise an altercation. I firmly believe that it will
result the next world war.
On the basis of the above discussion, I believe that there is going to be an altercation among some
countries over this issue. Although, there are many more conflicts that may result a world war,
Overall, I am convinced that water conflicts rule them all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, may, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28625954198 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79470903283 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580152671756 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2861367379 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.5625 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299095727635 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102581826864 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118511283626 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972108392091 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112451088086 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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