Many people believe that today there is a General increase in Anti Social behaviour and lack of respect for others. what might have caused this situation?how to improve it?
It is unfortunate that in the midst of vast progress in every field of life there is also a growth in the anti-
social behaviour and people have become less respectful of each other. This essay intends to analyze some
causes of this phenomenon and suggest some ways to ameliorate the situation.
Today, we live in an era of technology in which the whole Earth has shrunk and become a global village.
Everybody is connected to everybody through telephone lines and the internet, but the warmth of
relationships has taken a back seat. Most people have more than enough wealth, comfort and freedom,
but their hearts desire even more. To satisfy their hearts greed people have become workaholics, and as a
result have no time for family and friends. People have become selfish, isolated and indifferent. Each
person is busy in his own quest for more. To add to it, the youngsters who are at ease with the new
technology think that the elderly are good for nothing and that is why they don't respect them.
The changing family structure is another big cause of this phenomenon. Earlier, people lived in joint
families and the grandparents were there to supervise the children. Now there are nuclear families in
which both parents go out to work, and children are left unattended in the hands of pervasive media like
the TV and the internet. No one monitors what they watch and they see the programs full of violence and
crime, which makes them anti social. The pressure of consumerist society and peers also breeds anti social
behaviour. To add to it, the values of traditional culture are being lost and people are following the global
culture, which is also considered anti social by the orthodox elderly.
There are many solutions to this problem. To begin with, people have to learn to strike a balance between
work and family life. Government should also fix the maximum hours a worker can work per week so that
exploitation is not there in the job market. People should revert back to the old joint family system. This
would be in the benefit of all. The children would learn moral values and the elderly would be well looked
after. Negative effects of excessive consumerism should be taught to the people. Media can play a big role
in highlighting the good points of the traditional and the western culture so that the people can adopt
good social values. Neighbourhood associations should be set up to connect people to each other.
Summing up, anti social behaviour and mutual lack of respect in today's times can be dealt with by taking
simple measures, and individuals and governments should collectively take these steps.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 77, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...e good for nothing and that is why they dont respect them. The changing family st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2229.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9314159292 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51520845901 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537610619469 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3111904602 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.16 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.08 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253207038273 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648456716652 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488718009595 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0636122894545 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600092942196 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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