It is unfortunate that in the midst of vast progress in every field of life there is also a growth in the anti-social behaviour and people have become less respectful of each other. This essay intends to analyze several causes of this phenomenon and some solutions could be proposed to ameliorate this situation.
Anti-social behaviour can stem from an abundance of reasons. Initially, since people currently have a tendency to live in a nuclear family which both parents have to deal with the extensive workload, there is no one to supervise the children after school hours. This allows them to exposure to violent recreational media such as video games, television and movies. In addition, this phenomenon occurs not only due to the business but also the irresponsibility of parents. Individuals growing in an environment in which violence and discrimination are the norms may hold an anti-social attitude or disrespect others. For instance, children from unstable families where domestic violence happens on a daily basis could show a worrying tendency of disregarding women.
There are several feasible actions that could be taken to contribute to mitigate this social phenomenon. Firstly, a simple solution would be to make children engage in extracurricular activities after school or on weekend, which restricts them from unsavoury social media. Consequently, they will not only lead a more positive attitude but also stay away from health problems such as obesity and asthma. Secondly, the Government should enacts laws and severe punishments in order to ensure each parent behave properly in family life. Last but not least, the most practical one would be to help youngsters distinguish between the good and the bad and raise people’ awareness of manipulating the ill-mannered attitudes.
In conclusion, anti-social performances and mutual lack of respect these days arise from many dominant reasons. Fortunately , this negative trend can be dealt with by utilizing some typical measures and both individuals and the government should collectively take these steps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43518518519 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00440071705 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614197530864 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7546822414 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205352335931 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656024329209 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561078733537 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132009267765 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591374997637 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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