Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and a lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?
A segment of society assert that people are getting antisocial thesedays and they have no respect for each other. There are multiple causative factors that are responsible for this . Also, with certain actions ,this situation can be effectively altered. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the contributing factors for such behavior of a person and also its corrective measures.
To embark on, there are numerous factors behind the violent nature of the person. Firstly, increase in the crime rate develop more suspiciousness in masses, consequently they are unable to build trust on each other. For example- city dwellers hardly have faith on the people because of the fear of getting robbed or murdered, since there are many incidents of crime can be seen in the metropolis. Secondly, media produce bad impact on children by broadcasting the shows which involve fights, injuries and many life threatening scenes. Therefore , folks are getting detached from the society and believe to live alone.
However, there are various ways to ameliorate such attitude of citizens. On the one hand, government can impose stringent rules and regulations for the persons who commit criminal attempts. Additinality, there is the need of dealing with the primary causes of crime such as poverty and unemployment. For instance- majority of crimes happen because people are not able to fulfil their basic need of food. On the other hand, some strict regulations on violating media contents can surely benefit the society from the future incidents of physical fights as well as the crime. Hence, by developing such strategies the threat of crime in forthcoming years can be reduced.
To conclude, although there are multiple factors responsible for bad conduct of people but, with certain strategies this can be easily resolved, which ultimately help in the country’s progression
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3164983165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76666871286 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7693500074 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3125 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179160770895 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548795368375 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444169938738 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111112467941 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054199123404 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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