Depicting the one we admire is one of the most common practices since ages now. From copying their dressing style to the way they speak to everything they do. Though there has to be a myriad number of reasons for the same. This essay will discuss ”to be in trend” as a pivotal one. However, in this process we somehow forget our own real self, hence this results in the reason of our tribulation and this, I demure this practice.
To embark, may it be an affluent nation or a poor one, all individual wants to be in trend. They want everyone else to notice and praise them. And so they follow the one whom the rest of the world also admires. To illustrate, as per the Oxford research, the best way to promulgate anything in the market is by endorsing celebrities to sell that. We still believe in the myth that celebrities make the trend. Therefore, there is always an increment in followers.
On the contrary, we sometimes forget or neglect the inevitable repercussions of the aforementioned practices. All that is fleet today will be obsolete tomorrow - useful but neglected fact of the industry. For example, the recent research states 28% of the savings of the middle-class men go to buy stuff which is not necessary but just because their idol is using it, they also want to use it. Although, we have experienced many times the end result of such extravagant is long-term suffering.
To recapitulate, ”just to be in trend” we follow the one we appreciate, forgetting about the rugged results and this we cut our own corners ourselves. Now the question is, is it worth it?
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 395, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... is using it, they also want to use it. Although, we have experienced many times the end...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, may, so, still, therefore, as to, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73214285714 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7737194497 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617857142857 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1246733036 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9411764706 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0310079561986 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0113955439383 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0208540122933 0.0667982634062 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0182149454107 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136641774183 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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