Many people choose to live alone. What do you think the advantages of living alone are and do they outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people tend to live by themselves for several reasons, but the prominent reasons are the independent and freedom. Despite those advantages of living alone, disadvantages of the responsibility for having freedom and the financial burdens cannot be ignored. In my perspective, the worth of responsibility for those freedoms and independence is weighing more than that of benefits.
There are various purposes for people to live by themselves but among those, the primary purpose would be the independent. People are responsible financially and individually. People can be independent from young age by moved out of their houses to pursue their dreams. Also, since people have to pay for their own living expenses, they are becoming independent.
Another reason for people to live alone is the freedom. Since people are free from parents' nagging, scolding and interrupting with their decisions, they can enjoy their own lifestyles. They can get home late or they can stay up all night without family's interventions. Therefore, it is other reason for people to live by themselves, to seek for freedom.
Nevertheless, there are always dark side for every phenomenon. Likewise, the dark side for this issue is the responsibility. People have to make their own decisions and the consequences on that decisions have to be responsible. Sometimes, they can make wrong decisions due to inexperience and immaturity, and which can be phenomenal impact on their lifestyles. For instance, seeking for too much entertainment can lead to addiction in entertaining lifestyles whereas others suffer from other illegal activities.
In addition, financial burden is another problem to single household. All the living expenses or other expenses related to daily activities supposed to be managed by people. With their inexperience in budgeting and planning for saving the money, living alone can be challenging. Insufficient manage of that budgeting can lead to credit default.
To summarise, every issue have its benefits and drawbacks and which is equivalent to this case. Living alone can provide the freedom and independent lifestyles, but it is inevitable to face the responsibilities and financial burden.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'likewise', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'whereas', 'for instance', 'in addition']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216710182768 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.164490861619 0.155533422707 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0966057441253 0.0946595960268 102% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0391644908616 0.0501214627716 78% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0522193211488 0.0437548338989 119% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11227154047 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0443864229765 0.0403226058552 110% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.14150304375 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0469973890339 0.0326793684256 144% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0731070496084 0.0861772015684 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0313315926893 0.021408717616 146% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00522193211488 0.011925033212 44% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2200.0 1933.35771543 114% => OK
No of words: 341.0 316.048096192 108% => OK
Chars per words: 6.45161290323 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.395894428152 0.374742101984 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.302052785924 0.28420135186 106% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.231671554252 0.203846283523 114% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.181818181818 0.137316102897 132% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14150304375 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.037074148 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507331378299 0.56093040696 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 52.9822784529 60.7387585426 87% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.5 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.233457567 49.517814964 59% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.7743622355 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.814263465372 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38877755511 137% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 45.7052785924 49.1944974215 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.45918367347 1.69124875643 86% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345168494276 0.332605444948 104% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.116775454409 0.102741220458 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0890391020616 0.0668466124924 133% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.524240872176 0.534860350844 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.121216607891 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131416464237 0.134430193775 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793766104403 0.0742795772207 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.339226320383 0.324371583561 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0315707836497 0.0638462369009 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227372381554 0.228012699653 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596989346043 0.058150111329 103% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.68436873747 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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